Draw This Again: Take it off

I just had to do this.
"Take it off" has always been one of my favorite drawings, although the original looks quite crappy..but I don't know, it just has something special to it.
Anyways, that's the reason I decided to redraw it for this contest.
I believe you can see some improvement.

Here's the original: [link]

And here the new version: [link]